The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The given graph illustrates the consumption of chicken,
beef
, Use synonyms
lamb
, and Use synonyms
fish
in a European country through the period 1979 to 2004 as a whole. The vertical axis shows the amount of consumption per gram and, the horizontal axis represents time.
In detail, at the beginning, Use synonyms
beef
with more than 200 Use synonyms
gr
per person, had the highest consumption among the others Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
fish
with about 50 Use synonyms
gr
per person, scored the lowest. As time passed there had been a rise in chicken numbers, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
beef
, Use synonyms
lamb
and, Use synonyms
fish
experienced a continuous decline through those years. Notable to mention that they didn't decrease in the same way Use synonyms
for example
, in the first years more people ate Linking Words
beef
, but since 1989 a downward trend got started. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, there was a steady decrease in Linking Words
lamb
from 150 Use synonyms
gr
to around 50 Use synonyms
gr
in those 31 years. What is more, the Use synonyms
fish
was more stable, and always recorded something about 50 Use synonyms
gr
.
In conclusion, the majority of people in a European country are willing to eat more chicken and less Use synonyms
beef
and Use synonyms
lamb
, Use synonyms
meanwhile
they consume the same kilo grams of Add a comma
,meanwhile
fish
as they used to do.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, lamb, fish, gr with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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