The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The given graph illustrates the consumption of chicken,
beef
, lamb
, and fish
in a European country through the period 1979 to 2004 as a whole. The vertical axis shows the amount of consumption per gram and, the horizontal axis represents time.
In detail, at the beginning, beef
with more than 200 gr
per person, had the highest consumption among the others while
fish
with about 50 gr
per person, scored the lowest. As time passed there had been a rise in chicken numbers, however
, beef
, lamb
and, fish
experienced a continuous decline through those years. Notable to mention that they didn't decrease in the same way for example
, in the first years more people ate beef
, but since 1989 a downward trend got started. On the other hand
, there was a steady decrease in lamb
from 150 gr
to around 50 gr
in those 31 years. What is more, the fish
was more stable, and always recorded something about 50 gr
.
In conclusion, the majority of people in a European country are willing to eat more chicken and less beef
and lamb
, meanwhile
they consume the same kilo grams of Add a comma
,meanwhile
fish
as they used to do.Submitted by TUTOO on
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