The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forcast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.

The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forcast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.
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The graph illustrates information on the volume of
seafood
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imports
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in the United States from 2002 to 2022,
along with
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the prediction for 2032, and illustrates the distribution of
seafood
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imports
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among
countries
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in 2022.
Overall
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, the US
seafood
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import market grew substantially in the past two decades, with the majority of the
imports
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sourced from serval
countries
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. In the future,
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, import levels are forecast to shrink. Between the years 2002 and 2022,
seafood
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imports
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in the United States tripled from approximately 6 billion at the beginning of the period to well over 20 billion in 2022. Despite the past growth, the graph forecasts a decline in
seafood
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imports
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by approximately 2 billion in 2023 compared to the 2022 levels. Regarding the geographical spirit of import in 2022, China, Thailand and Canada were the dominant
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, controlling two-thirds of the market. China had to largest share of
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imports
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to the United States(28%), followed by Thailand (23%), and Canada (16%).
In contrast
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, other
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-
such
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as Indonesia, Vietnam, and Ecuador- each contributed less than 10% of the
seafood
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imports
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words seafood, imports, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • imports
  • exports
  • trade relations
  • forecast
  • consumption
  • depletion
  • local fish stocks
  • globalization
  • geographical distribution
  • dominance
  • biodiversity
  • trade agreements
  • proximity
  • economic impact
  • environmental concerns
  • overfishing
  • carbon footprint
  • logistics
  • market dynamics
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