Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter Suggest hou could help her in her home. Say why you would like to do this Explain when you will and will not be available.
Dear Mrs Barret
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to say that I saw your commercial about asking for help and I am ready to be at your service. I have been always interested in assisting people voluntarily.
Actually,I realise that you are a native English woman and I am sure that you may face many problems in terms of conveying your opinion or building communication.Do not worry any more. Since I am here to help you; as I know English
language very well and I can help you to find a carpenter to repair your furniture. Apart from that, I can teach you our local language. At least, some common sentences and statements. It may be useful.
As I mentioned,I have been always passionate about helping people and I have taken part in several charities and volunteer organisations. It makes me feel satisfaction and confidence. Change the article
the English
Moreover
, these kinds of activities can help to build a powerful personality.
I go to work every other day from morning until afternoon. This
summer, I going to work remotely for about 5 hours a day; because of energy issues. Therefore
, I can help you every day. At the weekend, I am free and you can count on me.
I looking forward to your answer if you agreed
or not.
Sincerely
MWrong verb form
agree
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coherence cohesion
Consider using more transition words to enhance the logical flow between paragraphs. For instance, instead of 'Actually, I realise,' you could say, 'Additionally, I realise.'
coherence cohesion
Ensure all paragraphs maintain a single, focused idea for better clarity. Some sentences within the paragraphs slightly stray from the main point.
task achievement
Although your tone is generally suitable for the task, incorporating a slightly more formal tone would be beneficial. For example, instead of 'I looking forward to your answer if you agreed or not,' you could say, 'I am looking forward to your response regarding whether you agree.'
task achievement
Your completion of the task is commendable, as you addressed all the necessary points: how you can help, why you want to help, and your availability.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing provide a respectful and polite tone, which is appropriate for an IELTS letter task.