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Some think that all entertaining TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is a common belief that some television
programs
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 designed to entertain should
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 contain educational content on social
issues
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.
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 it
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 is important to some extent, I disagree with the view that all entertainment
programs
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 should have educational value about social
issues
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. On the one hand, it is a great idea to put social
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 life on famous shows.
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 with, social media has a huge effect on citizens when a video about social troubles is uploaded on the internet,
people
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 will pay attention to it.
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,
people
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 will easily access and be conscious more about their country's
problems
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.
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, the content of social
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 is a noticed problem, the entertainment
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 will spread it to the audience is not too serious or grouchy.
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, when the covid pandemic has been flare-up, many shows encouraged
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 to follow the 5K rules to protect their health and
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 trend played an important way to stop the spread of the disease.
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, it is not the role of television channels to educate
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 about what is right and what is wrong within society. To commence with, many
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 find a program to relax after all day long.
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, if their healing items started to show some serious
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 as news, and social
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, their demands could not be served and they will get tired, frustrated, and not be healed after a day of hard work.
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,
people
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 should be free to choose whether they want to be educated about social
issues
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 or not. If they want to, they can research it on websites, youtube. In conclusion, adjunct the social
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 on
tv
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 shows may indeed change the essence of
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programs
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.
Although
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, many
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 content creators can consist of a social message
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 still protecting the
tv
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 shows in unique ways.

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