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People do not read newspapers anymore. Do you think its a positive or negative trend?

#people #newspapers #trend
In
this
 era
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newspapers
 are playing a vital role in
this
 society. Some people read
newspapers
 and the rest of them do not prefer to read it anymore. I believe that it is a positive trend.
This
 essay will discuss what are the positive and negative trends. At present, all people have been using mobile phones. So, it is an easy way for every person to read instant news from their device.
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, everyone in the nation has their personal responsibilities
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 and commitments, so they do not have time to relax and spend time with the newspaper. ,
Meanwhile
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 people hate reading papers and books these days. Because, some of them like to learn a lot of information from other technological inventions
instead
 of
newspapers
 and
also
, youngsters can learn more details than magazines. Though it has many advantages, let's see
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 of the view too.
Moreover
, many folks believe that
newspapers
 are overrated and that they are not suitable for the new generation. youngsters. The main reason is they have another option for improving their general knowledge. In spite, it has led to some negative effects. The reason is many newspaper production industries will lose their profit and lose their job. Older citizens can not read
newspapers
 if they close their newspaper manufacturing industry. Because for most older age individuals favourite pastime activity is reading
newspapers
.
To conclude
, it has few negative impacts despite the advantages outweighing the disadvantages. So, I strongly believe that it leads to positive trends for
this
 new decade of human beings in the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Decline
  • Obsolete
  • Digitalization
  • Convenience
  • Instant access
  • Journalism
  • Critical thinking
  • Analysis skills
  • Fake news
  • Misinformation
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