The diagram below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.
The diagrams show how houses for cool and warm temperatures are made.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are differences between buildings for cool and warm climates.
Firstly
, we will pay attention to the principle of house design for a cool climate. The building material is special for heat storage, what we call insulation. The roof has a high-angled so that the sun could enter into the construction. Inside, there is a thermal building material to decrease heat loss.
Secondly
, we will focus on the principle of house design for warm climates. Contrary to the previous one, here we search to reflect the sun, for this
, we observe external insulation with a reflective roof material which overhangs for shade. Finally
, during the day, windows are closed and covered, otherwise
, at night, windows are open for ventilation, thanks to that, the stored heat is removed and the temperature inside is lower.Submitted by santos_dij on
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