The graph shows the post-school qualifications
The pie charts indicate qualifications acquired by freshly graduated Canadian students for two age range groups.
It is apparent that the most significant field of study held by young adults is Social Science and Arts
whereas
MBA is the minority course among the middle-aged Linking Words
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, a fifth of Canadian citizens between the ages 25 to 35 hold a Linking Words
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it is slightly higher for the older Linking Words
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, Engineering fields portray the most distinct proportions between the two groups by a tenth. Linking Words
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, unlike the younger Linking Words
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with the 15th percentile of Education Use synonyms
degree
holders, older citizens show a moderately lower percentage. Use synonyms
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, young Canadians with Science, Maths, and Computers degrees comprised 18%, Linking Words
while
only a small percentage of the other Linking Words
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Apart from that, almost a fifth of the 515,600 Canadians are certified with a Use synonyms
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in Administration whilst there is only 15% of the 213,400 senior citizens. Use synonyms
Besides
, it is noticeable that there is an insignificant gap between the number of Linking Words
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holders in Nursing and Humanities of the two groups. With regard to the remaining courses, the fraction of students varies by only 2%.Use synonyms
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