The graph shows the post-school qualifications
The pie charts indicate qualifications acquired by freshly graduated Canadian students for two age range groups.
It is apparent that the most significant field of study held by young adults is Social Science and Arts
whereas
MBA is the minority course among the middle-aged group
.
Firstly
, a fifth of Canadian citizens between the ages 25 to 35 hold a degree
in Social Science and Arts while
it is slightly higher for the older group
. Furthermore
, Engineering fields portray the most distinct proportions between the two groups by a tenth. Likewise
, unlike the younger group
with the 15th percentile of Education degree
holders, older citizens show a moderately lower percentage. Moreover
, young Canadians with Science, Maths, and Computers degrees comprised 18%, while
only a small percentage of the other group
with the same degree
.
Apart from that, almost a fifth of the 515,600 Canadians are certified with a degree
in Administration whilst there is only 15% of the 213,400 senior citizens. Besides
, it is noticeable that there is an insignificant gap between the number of degree
holders in Nursing and Humanities of the two groups. With regard to the remaining courses, the fraction of students varies by only 2%.Submitted by eimanasrinooh
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