The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in new Zealand between 1901 and 2101

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in new Zealand between 1901 and 2101
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The provided chart illustrates the changes in
birth
and dying records in New Zealand over a 20-year period as a whole.
Birth
and
death
figures on the vertical axis are plotted against years. It is evident from the line graph that in the whole picture from 1901 to 2101 the
death
, and delivery rate got increased. Speaking with more details, in the beginning, as 20
birth
there was only 10 passing. Notable to mention that 1941 was a trigger point for the number of
birth
.
In other words
, New Zealand's population between 1941, and 1961, experienced a sharp jump from 30 newborns per day to its peak(something about 70 people per day).
On the other hand
, the
death
ratio had its steep growth starting in 2001 and
then
reached its highest score in 2061. What is more, in 2041 the national statistics stated that
death
crossed over
birth
, and since
then
, the situation has been steady.
To sum up
, by a quick look at the line chart it is obvious that at
first,
more children used to get
birth
than people used to die.
However
, the situation didn't
last
forever, so
at the end
of the era,
death
overcame
birth
.
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