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Government should put tax on unhealthy food to motivate people to eat Healthy food. Do you agree or disagree?

#government #tax #food #people
Some sections of society opine that the government should impose a tax on unhealthy
food
 in order to promote the public to eat more healthy foodstuff. I partially agree with
this
 statement because some
people
 may hesitate to buy instant
food
, but others will still eat it. On the one hand, some
people
 will stop buying fast
food
meal
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 too much simply because the price is too high. One of the main benefits of fast foodstuff is thought to be its cheapness, so price riding will be the incentive for
people
 to purchase healthy
meal
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,
such
 as local vegetables, meat, and dairy, which are much more reasonable than fast
food
. Actually, in most cases, healthy foodstuff is more tasty
that
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 is why once they start eating it, their eating lifestyle is going to change to
much
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 more nutritious one without unhealthy
food
.
On the other hand
, others are rich enough to buy unhealthy
food
 at a high price. For them, imposing
tax
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 on fast
food
 does not make sense. They are not likely to understand the government's intention and still consume
this
 kind of
food
.
For instance
,
according to
 some articles. Single men tend to keep buying it.
This
 is because most of them are not used to cooking.
In addition
 to that, they can use their salary as they like, in comparison to the couple.
Therefore
, the policy of putting a tax may not be effective for some
people
/ In conclusion, I partly agree with the idea that
people
 will start eating healthy cooking under the policy of taxing
on
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instant
food
 by the government since
of
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some individuals will stop buying fast
food
,
however
, it will not be the case.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Government intervention
  • Public health issues
  • Taxation
  • Unhealthy food
  • Obesity
  • Heart diseases
  • Diabetes
  • Consumption
  • Sugar taxes
  • Disproportionately affect
  • Low-income families
  • Healthy alternatives
  • Public health education
  • Socioeconomic groups
  • Subsidies
  • Public awareness campaigns
  • Food education
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