Practice: You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: - Explain that you have completed your studies - Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code - Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Hello Dears . I hope

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letter finds you well . I am excited to invite you to my graduation ceremony. In the beginning, I have been studying for four years , I am studying Accounting which is my dream major . Next week I will have graduated , There are 100 pupils in the ceremony , Each pupil could invite 4 people including families ,

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, I would like to invite you And my sister ,

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I want to invite my closest friend, Because he invited me before. In terms of time and date , It going to be on 12th of the June at 3:00 PM , The location is

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a stadium at my university .

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, there is a lunch meal and many cuisines from different countries , Hot drinks and cold drinks are available and free . Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you . Best regards Osama Altimimie

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structure

Improve paragraphing by separating different ideas into their own paragraphs.

grammar

Proofread for minor grammatical errors and inconsistencies.

tone

The letter has a warm and personal tone, suitable for inviting family.

content

All key details about the graduation event are included clearly.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

161 words

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