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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

#teachers #homework #students #support
According to
 me, it is very much necessary for a student to do the there
work
 and I strongly
support
to
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the point that a teacher should give
homework
 to the students. Specific reason and details to
support
 my answer
is
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 given below. My
support
to
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this
 answer
in
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discribe
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describe
described
blow
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below
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.
Firstly
, the things which
a
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people
 learn in
the
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school
is
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 better for them if they
revicese
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revise
.
For example
, if sir will give
work
 to a
people
then
 that will help them in
there
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their
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the
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life. Education works
more
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better if it gets from the school
as well as
 home. Homeworks make
a
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children more
prefect
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perfect
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. If
a
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institution will provide
homework
 daily will help
a
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public to get more and more knowledge.
Homework
 will help
a the
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 public.
Secondly
, sir should give less
work
 which can be done easily by the child.
For example
, if
a
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people
dident
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didn't
 do
there
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their
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work
then
 it will be hard for them to learn things easily.
Thirdly
, a child should do
work
 properly
that
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 it can help her in future. Teachers should provide more knowledge to
a
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people
 about doing
new
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activity
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at
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the
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free
work
. The Teacher should provide
homework
 like yoga and much more. In conclusion, it is good for children to have
homework
. From
above
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the above
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 data
i
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 strongly
support
to give
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giving
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homeworks
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homework
 to
a
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childrens
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children
children's
.
Thus
,
homework
 is necessary for a student because it
help
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helps
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 them to learn easily.
Hence
, I
support
to
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a teacher
for
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the
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assigning
homeworks
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homework
 to the students.
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