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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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life. Education works
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assigning
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 to the students.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reinforces learning
  • deeper understanding
  • discipline
  • time-management
  • consistent study habits
  • academic performance
  • retention of information
  • student burnout
  • independent learning
  • balanced approach
  • quality over quantity
  • mental health impact
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