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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The
process
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 describes how to create
tomato
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ketchup
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. In general, there are 15 steps in
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process
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, commencing with harvesting
tomatoes
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 and putting them in baskets and concluding with using
ketchup
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 to eat with food. At the start of the
process
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,
tomatoes
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 are picked by farmers and put in baskets .
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, they are carefully selected
according to
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 their quality. Once decent
tomato
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 qualities have been sorted, they are sent to a factory, where
tomato
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ketchup
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 is made. In the fourth stage , workers in a factory remove the stalks, seeds and skin of
tomatoes
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. After that, a huge number of
tomatoes
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 which are removed carefully, are placed and crushed in the container. In The following stage, employees working in a factory add sugar, vinegar and salt to the liquid of
tomatoes
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. After being boiled at high temperatures . The
process
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 continues when the sauce
tomatoes
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 are left on the stove in order to wait two hours.
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, the liquid of
tomatoes
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 is poured into the
ketchup
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 which is made of glass.
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,
tomato
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ketchup
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 is labelled. At the same time, workers determine the
tomato
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ketchup
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 quality. The next phase is that the
tomato
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ketchup
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 is packed into boxes, and
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 the boxes are loaded onto a lorry and
then
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 are delivered to supermarkets.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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