The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now

The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The diagram illustrates the given park has been changed in 1980 and now.
Overall
, the pond and trees are stable in the same place.
However
, the now-in flowers are replaced with playgrounds and bushes and adding some other things on the map. A quick glance at the map brings out that, in the southeast flowers were replaced with playgrounds in 1980 and now. The flower's place is converted into a bush, which is the southwest area.
Furthermore
, the trees in adding more things for fun
such
as chairs, desks and barbecues. Moving on to 1980, three benches are available but now include one more bench there on the left. The park on two roads was available with two gates in 1980 and now there are four sides open without any gates.
Moreover
, the pond was stable in the same place within both time periods.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformed
  • expanded
  • renovated
  • upgraded
  • revamped
  • refurbished
  • install
  • addition
  • increase
  • enhance
  • improve
  • introduce
  • upgrade
  • create
  • development
  • facilities
  • recreational areas
  • wildlife habitats
  • pathways
  • walkways
  • seating areas
  • lighting arrangements
  • ponds
  • lakes
  • sports facilities
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