The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The given diagram highlights information about the floor schedule of a communal library twenty years ago and its present design.
Overall
, it can be seen that free services are given to readers by special gadgets and also
on room
on the northwest has been expanded along with
the room
on the southeast which its rounded
corner making way for an entry door.
Looking at the details, Tables, Correct article usage
a rounded
as well as
Chairs have been removed from the centre. Followingly, the place of Adult non-fiction books
has been inverted into a fiction books
area conversely
; just bottom of them, an information desk is added with self-service machines nearby. Oppositely, All reference books
have taken place.
Additionally
, on the northeast corner, the children's books
area has turned into a lecture room
; moreover
, the left-above room
is the only room
which has been expanded ; sofas
, storytelling events and children's fiction Change preposition
with sofas
books
. What's more, the reading room
has been replaced with a computer room
and its door also
now is paralleled with an Entrance. Finally
, the Enquiry desk on the southeast has been redeveloped into a Cafe.Submitted by mehrdad.salahi2003 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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