Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Discus the advantages and disadvantages.

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education
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or they can not afford
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envestment
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investment
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work.
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other
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one person take all
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responsibility
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to perform
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for travel because they feel
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educational life that way they want to take
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time and money .when
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family that can not carry on
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due lot of expenses,
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