In the future all cars , buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?

Due to

advancement

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the advancement

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of technology ,

vehicles

are predicted that it will be driven driverless in future. There are some advantages

as well as

disadvantages too. I’ll elaborate

further

in upcoming paragraphs. The

vehicles

without driver is

bit

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a bit

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ridiculous. Since the

people

have not been used

vehicle

with driver.

Firstly

, these

vehicles

are highly designed and has set a program which to drive safely without any error.

For instance

, we can reduce the accidents , which occurs

due to

drivers

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drivers'

driver's

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mistake, as

he

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they

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might

fall

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asleep or

night

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vision problem

so

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and so

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on.

Secondly

, we can

breath

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a

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clear and fresh air,

due to

these

vehicles

smokes

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, many pollutions that impact our environment and triggers many health problems in forthcoming.

Thirdly

, we can save

fuel

that these

vehicles

consume more and avoid

fuel

shortage.

For example

, after covid-19 the essential thing of

human

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humans

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could see a shortage ,

likewise

for

fuel

as well too. Especially, Sri Lanka faced tremendous

problem

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problems

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due to

lack

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a lack

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of

fuel

in

country

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the country

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.

Hence

, using

this electric

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this electric vehicle

these electric vehicles

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vehicles

could save up more

fuel

in future.

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks

of

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to

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using these robotic

vehicles

.

To begin

with, all these driverless

vehicles

are system

accordingly

, so if there is any fault in it whole process collapse.

For example

,

this

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if this

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robotic

vehicle

is going smoothly

in

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on

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a hill road carrying the passengers, suddenly there will be

loose

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connection in the

vehicle

and it drops off somewhere.

Secondly

,these

vehicles

are high in cost .

for instance

, since it’s expensive it’s not affordable for

a

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middle class

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middle-class

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people

to buy it , only rich

people

could afford it.

Thirdly

, many drivers would

lost

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lose

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their jobs.

Nevertheless

, if he’s the one who knows only to drive ,

then

it’s a huge hurdle for him. In conclusion , In the future numerous

people

will

adapt

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adopt

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for

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apply

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this

driverless

vehicle

, despite the fewer drawbacks as it will save many accidents and

pollutions

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pollution

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and protect our environment. I strongly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.