In the future all cars , buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?

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advancement
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the advancement
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of technology ,
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are predicted that it will be driven driverless in future. There are some advantages
as well as
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disadvantages too. I’ll elaborate
further
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in upcoming paragraphs. The
vehicles
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without driver is
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a bit
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ridiculous. Since the
people
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have not been used
vehicle
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with driver.
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, these
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are highly designed and has set a program which to drive safely without any error.
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, we can reduce the accidents , which occurs
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drivers
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drivers'
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mistake, as
he
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they
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might
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asleep or
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vision problem
so
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and so
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on.
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, we can
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a
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clear and fresh air,
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these
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smokes
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, many pollutions that impact our environment and triggers many health problems in forthcoming.
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, we can save
fuel
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that these
vehicles
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consume more and avoid
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shortage.
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, after covid-19 the essential thing of
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humans
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could see a shortage ,
likewise
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for
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as well too. Especially, Sri Lanka faced tremendous
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problems
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due to
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lack
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a lack
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of
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in
country
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the country
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.
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, using
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this electric
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this electric vehicle
these electric vehicles
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vehicles
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could save up more
fuel
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in future.
On the other hand
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, there are some drawbacks
of
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to
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using these robotic
vehicles
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.
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with, all these driverless
vehicles
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are system
accordingly
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, so if there is any fault in it whole process collapse.
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,
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this
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if this
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robotic
vehicle
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is going smoothly
in
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on
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a hill road carrying the passengers, suddenly there will be
loose
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connection in the
vehicle
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and it drops off somewhere.
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,these
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are high in cost .
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, since it’s expensive it’s not affordable for
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middle class
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people
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to buy it , only rich
people
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could afford it.
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, many drivers would
lost
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lose
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their jobs.
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, if he’s the one who knows only to drive ,
then
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it’s a huge hurdle for him. In conclusion , In the future numerous
people
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will
adapt
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adopt
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for
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this
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driverless
vehicle
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, despite the fewer drawbacks as it will save many accidents and
pollutions
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pollution
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and protect our environment. I strongly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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