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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, juveniles use their mobile phones regularly for hours. Minors spend a lot of
time
 watching youtube videos and vlogs. Creators make thumbnails in
such
 a unique way that it urges young ones to watch more and more videos on video streaming platforms. I think it's a negative thing because the excessive use of  smartphones lead to physical or mental illness. Teenagers spend most of their
time
 on social media and other streaming site.
For instance
, most YouTubers write their video descriptions to gain more viewers.
Moreover
, Netflix movies and seasons thumbnails are made to be more and more attractive to gain public attention. As technology has revolutionised, mobile games are becoming increasingly popular among juveniles.
For example
, Pubg became a famous mobile game having over 1 billion downloads and almost over 500 million are teenagers. Extensive use of mobile devices
also
 leads to many health issues.
For instance
, the rays from the mobile screen can damage your eyesight.
This
 can
also
 cause, both migraine problems and headaches. Juveniles do not spend
time
 with their families and they did not get a chance to learn about essential
life
 lessons, which may cause social anxiety and depression in their future
life
.
For example
,teenagers who learn things about
life
 from movies or television shows generally fail to have a good understanding of
life
 and eventually become fail. In conclusion,
this
 habit of young ones will eventually spoil them, leading to both social and family problems. I think parents should consider keeping an eye on their kid's screen
time
.
This
 may help to prevent the failure in their children's
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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