It is generally believed that some people are born with talents, for instance sport or music, and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person. discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It cannot be denied that
talents
play a significant role in becoming a professional dancer or musician. While
,
other people argue that Remove the comma
apply
children
's training would be an option. I believe in
some extent that everything will be Change preposition
to
achieavable
by Correct your spelling
achievable
children
's teaching and coaching.
On the one hand, some people claim that numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
children
are born with great talents
in some fields. First of all, gifted children
are genious
in their nature. They would make a success without any Correct your spelling
genius
encouragements
and positive Fix the agreement mistake
encouragement
feedbacks
. Fix the agreement mistake
feedback
For instance
, no one have
become Ronaldo in the world of football. Change the verb form
has
Although
, he had faced numerous obstacles yet his great talents
assisted him to become a famous football player. Second of all, the role of gene heritage cannot be ignored. Researchers have indicated that talents
are coded in our genes such
as our personality features or physical appearance. Therefore
, they have been handed through relatives.
On the other hand
, there are people who suppose that educating children
is the best approach to foster
skills. Wrong verb form
fostering
Numbers
of teachers have declared that schools have crucial impacts Fix the agreement mistake
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in
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on
children
's learning. Teaching various concepts through education
system Correct article usage
the education
improve
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improves
children
's knowledge. Take a wealthy kid as an example, participating in piano classes give
them the opportunity to become a pianist. Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
Furthermore
, history have
had many examples of politicians who had been taught in universities to be Change the verb form
has
rullers
of countries with no background in the past.
In conclusion, from where I stand, not only beneficial would be having certain Correct your spelling
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talents
, but also
taking part in courses related to what they desire to learn is essential as well.Submitted by niloofar.ot92 on
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