In many countries the cost of living is rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem

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It is believed that the living expenses in numerous countries have been rising.In my opinion,it is affecting the mental and physical

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of workers

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an increase in the crime rate in society.There are some steps that can be taken to overcome

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problem which I would discuss

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essay.

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people

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are facing

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issues

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grow in living costs.

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, working hours in any country is eight hours and it was recently reported that working more than eight hours affects

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health

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people

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have to work more to pay all of their commercial bills, cost of education, food and taxes and

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leads them to

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problems.So, the government should provide no tuition-fee education and reduce the price of essentials of life

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as food which is needed by every person.

On the other hand

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people

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offend crimes

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poverty in society.

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,in recent research it was found that countries with poverty have high crime rate because of unemployment

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even employees work overtime but fails to make both ends meet they become depressed and

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leads them to despair and hate towards government and rebellions occurs which is

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a crime.

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, it not only harms authorities but

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of society have to face thefts,snatching and sometimes murder.To tackle all these authorities should focus on the industrial sector and increase the economic development budget.

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, I think that

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should show some patience in these circumstances because the ups and cons are part of life and the government should try its best to relieve

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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In many countries the cost of living is rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem

Your opinion

What can we learn from the boys' experience about the nature of power and leadership?

Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum children, others think that for all school age children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion,

Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?