You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: ###say which points in the article you agree with ###explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres ###offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

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letter to that you published Mr Cooked's article in your newspaper, which described

town

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centres across Srilanka.

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, Mr Cooked explained the article very extensively about the influx of visitors,

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and its architecture, as a professor of

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I agree with you on some opinions and the way you described the details of towns.

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, there was one point that I cannot agree with which was in point you stated, the

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centres were similar to each other.

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, Srilanka has a different

history

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and has its own architecture for every city and every

town

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represents that very well. To illustrate

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point, Kandy and Colombo

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represent their appearance in traditional and modern ways.

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, I would like to offer a tour for your writer to visit the country

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centres that will explain our country's

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and appearance.

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will be guided by me and I will take care of your writer. In anticipation of your response, I shall remain. Yours sincerely, Mr Kean Edward

iresha.kumanayake

Dec 14, 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that you introduce the subject of your letter clearly in the opening paragraph and maintain a logical progression of ideas throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriate for a letter to an editor, maintaining a formal tone.

coherence cohesion

Try to adhere to one main idea per paragraph to keep the letter organized and reader-friendly.

task achievement

Fully respond to all the bullet points mentioned in the task prompt so as not to neglect any part of the task.

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Maintain a consistent and suitable writing tone throughout the letter to properly address the recipient and subject matter. A mix of formal and informal tones can detract from the overall effectiveness.

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2
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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