You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: ###say which points in the article you agree with ###explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres ###offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

this

letter to that you published Mr Cooked's article in your newspaper, which described

town

centres across Srilanka.

Moreover

, Mr Cooked explained the article very extensively about the influx of visitors,

History

and its architecture, as a professor of

history

I agree with you on some opinions and the way you described the details of towns.

However

, there was one point that I cannot agree with which was in point you stated, the

town

centres were similar to each other.

Furthermore

, Srilanka has a different

history

and has its own architecture for every city and every

town

represents that very well. To illustrate

this

point, Kandy and Colombo

town

represent their appearance in traditional and modern ways.

Therefore

, I would like to offer a tour for your writer to visit the country

town

centres that will explain our country's

history

and appearance.

This

will be guided by me and I will take care of your writer. In anticipation of your response, I shall remain. Yours sincerely, Mr Kean Edward

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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