More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people supposed that they should raise the costs of some products, which might cause the obesity issue. From my perspective, I partially agree with

this

assertion,

while

it may be true in some situations, others seem to be not effective. In

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essay, I will discuss both views to support

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my opinion. On the one hand, Increasing the price of fattening foods would be an indirect way to solve

this

but it still could bring benefits, because almost everyone would prioritize items which are both cheap and healthy which could lead to a reduction in the consumption of these foods.

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: if I had two option drinks, a Red Bull can more sugar and costs more than 1 revive one, which can help add the necessary amount of salt to the body, I

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go to the latter.

On the other hand

, the cost rising in high calories foods can help decrease the proportion of people who are becoming seriously outweighed, but

also

could halt many businesses of different factories and the

food

industry, so I think some more effective solutions should be applied

For example

study researches shows that by making the bowl smaller, that would cause people to consume less

food

. If the governments apply

this

approach to fast

food

restaurants, it could decrease obesity rates better than raising prices. In conclusion, the growth in the value of fatten

food

could bring advantages in some cases,

besides

that it still has some troubles to apply

this

method.

Hence

, I will partially agree with

this

statement.