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The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.

The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
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The bar chart
illustrate
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 the average
increase
 in
GDP
 in rich
countries
 where
global
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the global
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approach
 has been
adapted
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adopted
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.
Countries
 with
global
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a global
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approach
 to business and
countries
 that have not.
Globalisers
 had the biggest
growth
 in
GDP
. Wealthy
countries
 experienced the biggest decrease and
also
globalisers
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globalised
experinced
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experienced
experience
significant
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a significant
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 decrease
while
growth
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the growth
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 rates of
non-
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non-globalised
globalisers
 fluctuated to 2% from 1960 to 1990. In the first decade, namely in
1960s
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the 1960s
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 wealthy
countries
 had the biggest
growth
rate
 almost 5%.
While
globalisers
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globalised
experinced
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experienced
 the smallest
growth
rate
to
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 2%
This
rate
 was approximately 1.5% developing
countries
 adopting a global
approach
 to business.When it comes to
non-
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non-globalised
globalisers
they
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the
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growth
rate
 was
to
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apply
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2% During the next decade the percentage of
GDP
growth
 in wealthy
countries
 decrease significantly just below
to
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2%.
Whereas
this
rate
increase
 in other
countries
 that have a global
approach
. In
1980s
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the 1980s
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 the
growth
 of
GDP
 in wealthy
countries
 went on declining and by 1990 had decreased to 2%.
Globalisers
experinced
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experienced
experience
slight
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a slight
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increase
 in 1980 to 3%.
While
 non-
globalisers
 increased significantly in 1980 in
GDP
growth
. By the end of the
period
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globalisers
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globalists
 had the biggest
increase
 in
GPD
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GDP
growth
 reaching 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 68%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words increase, gdp, countries, approach, globalisers, growth, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • affluent nations
  • global business orientation
  • sustained growth
  • investment in technology
  • skilled labor
  • fluctuations
  • global trade
  • vulnerability
  • global market shifts
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • reliance on local markets
  • limited exposure
  • economic downturns
  • implications
  • economic policies
  • strategies
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