The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above chart display about information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
Firstly
, income spend in 1968 on food it was 35%, on housing it was 10%, on fuel and power it was 7%, on clothing and footwear it was 10%, household equipment it was nearly 12%, personal goods it was more than 5%, on ,transport it was less than 10% and on ,leisure it was around 10%.
Secondly
, in the year 2018, on food it was more than 15%, housing it was less than 20%, fuel and power it was around 5%, clothing and footwear it was 5%, household goods it was 12% personal goods it was 4%, transport it was 14% and leisure it was 22%.
In conclusion, however
, the highest spend was on food in 1968 and 2018 on leisure. The lowest on fuel was in 1968 and also
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