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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own Knowledge or experience.

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Printing newspapers or
books
 in the future is the topic of discussion. I strongly agree people prefer to read news or
books
 online
instead
 of paying for printed ones in the near future. The first reason would be about
time
 because the community is working all day and busy in
this
 fast-paced world.
For example
, a person who works from morning until afternoon and needs to spend
time
 on daily routines
such
 as workout, cooking and household chores and
also
 the important
one
 which is taking care of children, cannot spend
time
 going out and buying a printed book or newspaper. So, it is hard to find
time
 to buy a printed book or newspaper. The second reason is about
technology
due to
 improving in
technology
 and everyone likes to learn new things.
For instance
, since Covid-19 happened social distancing showed everyone that everything can happen with
one
 click and everyone started to follow news online or read
books
 online because maybe the printed ones have a virus.
Hence
,
technology
 changes human life through printed papers. Some may argue that nations will buy printed
books
 in the future because they do not like to destroy the business of those offices.
However
, those offices need to work in different fields
such
 as educational
books
 for schools and there is not any economic problem for them. In conclusion, I believe that people will use online newspapers and
books
instead
 of buying because of two reasons,
one
 is about
time
 and the other
one
 is
technology
.
On the contrary
, some think that people will buy papers
due to
 not destroy their work which is not reasonable to me.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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