ou missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter •Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight •Explain how missing your flight affected you •Make it clear what you would like the airline to do
Dear Marija,
I am very pleased to hear that you
finally
decided to go on a camping holiday and asked for my advice. I look forward to helping you and giving advice from my own experience and perspective.
I think that you will enjoy this
summer camping trip because the weather for the next couple of weeks is going to be great and the nature and landscapes that you will explore for ten days are going to be very beautiful and moving. In my opinion, you will feel uplifted and come back mentally improved and rested. However
, you have to prepare for the possible weather changes, so take very practical clothes with you, that you could
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can
use
not only for warmer days but Verb problem
wear
also
for colder ones. Also
prepare for wild animals that could get in your way, take a flashlight and a knife with you just in case you need it.
In my opinion, you will enjoy Add a comma
Also,
this
camping trip very much and if you are not sure that you can handle it by yourself, I would love to come with you and be your companion. I look forward to hearing from you, stay safe.
Yours sincerely,Submitted by oimigle on
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task achievement
Ensure that your letter addresses all the specifics of the task prompt. In this case, the letter should address missed flights and their impact, not camping advice.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down your ideas into clearly defined and separate paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or aspect.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitably informal, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are clear and appropriately formatted.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite