Why most of the students go to university to pursue their academic studies. However, while I believe that there are many vocational trainings available in universities so students can become qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Students should be encouraged to take vocational courses as there is a huge shortage of professional workers.

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In today's era, most of the
students
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go to university to pursue their academic studies.
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, I believe that there are many vocational trainings available in universities so
students
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can become qualified
workers
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such
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as electricians and plumbers.
Students
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should be encouraged to take vocational
courses
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as there is a huge shortage of professional
workers
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. In general, there are lower white-collar
jobs
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available in the market as there is huge competition going on.
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the low work possibility of getting
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after doing vocational
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and
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their peer pressure,
students
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are bound to take loans at a higher interest rate to get into academic
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and
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get in depression or anxious to pay the amount after completing the course
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this
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every 7th student out of 10 are facing stress-related illness.
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, there are many
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available but they are not qualified
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so the job done by them is not efficient and effective and qualified
workers
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are fewer so they will charge higher for normal technical work.
Due to
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rising competition in the professional field for
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and a decrease in people for technical field
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, requirements for qualified technical
workers
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get high and some
workers
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require a higher amount. In my opinion, government authorities and universities should work together and introduce some scholarships and many other schemes so it will help develop more qualified
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.
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, high wages will attract
students
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to get into some vocational training and develop their careers in it. In conclusion, to maintain balance in the market vocational
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should get similar fame and demand as academic
courses
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are getting
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this
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may lead to lower numbers of qualified technical
workers
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.
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