Some people think that the main purpose of school and university education should be to prepare people for work. Others, however, think that the true role of education is to make us better citizens. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It's important that young
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become knowledgeable citizens who understand different cultures and complex media debates. Some argue that in schools and
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encourage students to study
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like religious education, languages and literature. Others suggest that the proper role of education systems is to prepare young
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for the job market, training them in
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like business studies, statistics or computer science.
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essay will discuss both views There are many convincing reasons why training young
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to become good citizens should be a higher priority for educational institutions.
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, having the ability to contribute to public discussion is becoming more important
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new media.
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, social media sites, like Twitter and Facebook, often include complex discussions on International trade or human rights, which we should try to make useful contributions to. Teaching young
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about other cultures will increase understanding and trust in society.
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, if Europeans learned about celebrations like Eid, they might become more understanding of these traditions.
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, there are good arguments for investing in
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-related courses.
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, gaining a
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qualification at university helps individuals become successful in their careers.
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, in the United States,
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with a professional degree are 30 per cent less likely to be out of
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than
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who have a general degree.
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, some professions desperately need graduates with
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qualifications from university.
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, in the UK, the most popular degree
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include academic
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like history and philosophy and there aren't enough graduates in medicine and engineering. In conclusion, how we answer the question depends very much on whether we want to prioritise the interests of society, individuals or businesses. Personally, I believe economic strength is at the root of a successful society and so the purpose of education should be to prepare students for
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