A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

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Dear Raman, I am very grateful to ask me about a holiday destination, which I have already visited. I want to tell you that the

last

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summer, I went to

Punjab

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for my vacation, which is a good destination for a holiday because there are many places to see

such

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as The Golden Temple which is located in Amritsar,

Punjab

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and made from real gold.

This

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is the must place to visit because it is a symbol of god and love.

Apart from

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this

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, Rose Garden is

also

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there, which has thousands of different types of roses and the Sikh Museum has a lot of items related to Sikh culture. That time, I stayed with my aunt because she is my close family member. if you want that I can arrange a room for you in my aunt's house who has a big house in

Punjab

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and she loves to share a house with you. She will

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help you to see different places in

Punjab

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Apart from

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this

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, I

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have information about famous hotels where you can book your room online. I want to tell you one more thing that without the street food of

Punjab

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, the vacation will not going to complete. you can try different food from the street which is delicious and healthy like Mango Lassi, roti and so many others. I hope

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information will help you to arrange your best ever holiday in your life. yours lovingly, Veena

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

245 words

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