Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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the given map shows the development of the village named Chorleywood since the increase of their population in the nineteenth century.
overall
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it is clear that
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with the passage of time, the area has witnessed a significant improvement in terms of the commute system and land areas as well. from 1868-1883, Chorleywood experienced its journey on the main
road
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. 2 main
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road
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roads
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were built during
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time, one of which ran from west to east, and the other one from north-east to south-east. both roads converged on the northwest side of the golf course, which is located in the middle of the village.
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, the western part of the park faced some landing improvements as well.
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, the map was getting covered with new motorways and stations till 1970. the new line ran from north-east to south-east, intersecting the main
road
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going towards east. in the
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24 years, the villagers were introduced to the railway line, which made its journey from southwest to southeast, leaving from the station in the southwest which was built in the previous years.
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, on its way it made a junction with one main
road
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and the motorway, which made the four adjacent points corners of the squared-shaped golf park.
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, some lands were used to establish new facilities.
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, areas in the southeast and northeast underwent some bigger transformations during
this
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time.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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