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The top piority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#piority #businesses #money #responsibilities
Making
money
 is the first
piority
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priority
 of
bussiness
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business
 is making
money
, and they do not have to have public responsibilities.
This
 writer totally
disagree
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 with
this
 statement and will explain why in the following essay. On the one hand, people who work for a
bussiness
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business
is
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are
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 normal people like everyone in the social, so they have to have social
resposibilities
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responsibilities
.
For example
, a man
work
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works
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 in a
bussiness
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business
, he has to obey every
rules
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rule
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 in
social
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society
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, there is no exception.
Moreover
,
bussinessman
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businessman
businessmen
 have to obey financial law to not get into trouble to make the social better, the
bussinesses
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businesses
 have to
equity
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 to make the social better.
On the other hand
,
bussinesses
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businesses
 make
money
 not only for
them
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themselves
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, some part of
these
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this money
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money
 should be spent to help the social better.
For example
, a lot of presidents from many big
bussinesses
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businesses
 quote a part of their profit to donate
for
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to
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 charity organisers to help children all around the world.
Bussinesses
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Businesses
 have to have public
responsibilites
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responsibilities
, they have
responsibility
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a responsibility
the responsibility
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to
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for
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 what they do.
For example
,
nowaday
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nowadays
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, some
of
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apply
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the bussinesses
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bussinesses
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businesses
 are
greed
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, they
ready
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are ready
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 to do illegal to have
money
, so they have to face
with
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apply
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rules and
social
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society
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. In conclusion,
bussinesses
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businesses
save
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 their
money
 for their plan
in
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for
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 the future is not negative but if they give them to
social
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society
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, they will have an enormous profit.
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