The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the consumption of carbon dioxide in
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per person in four different countries of Europe including the
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, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
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, we can see that the trend of consumption of CO2 in the
UK
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and Sweden was downward.
However
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, Italy and Portugal had an upward trend. In 1967, The
UK
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had the highest
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of carbon dioxide, more than 10
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per person. There was a slight decrease in the CO2
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in the
UK
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which
at the end
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of 2007 it reached 8.5
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. Sweden had a fluctuation in its
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, from 1967 to 2007 reached at its peak
roughly
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10
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. After
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there was a sharp decline and in 2007 the carbon dioxide
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was half, about 5
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. In 1967, Portugal had the least amount of emissions, 2
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. The CO2
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rose significantly and tripled in 1997 and stayed for a decade until 2007.
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, the trend of Italy was the same as Portugal from 4
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in 1967 and under 8
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in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, uk, emission with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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