The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the consumption of carbon dioxide in
tonnes
per person in four different countries of Europe including the
UK
, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, we can see that the trend of consumption of CO2 in the
UK
and Sweden was downward.
However
, Italy and Portugal had an upward trend. In 1967, The
UK
had the highest
emission
of carbon dioxide, more than 10
tonnes
per person. There was a slight decrease in the CO2
emission
in the
UK
which
at the end
of 2007 it reached 8.5
tonnes
. Sweden had a fluctuation in its
emission
, from 1967 to 2007 reached at its peak
roughly
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10
tonnes
. After
that
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there was a sharp decline and in 2007 the carbon dioxide
emission
was half, about 5
tonnes
. In 1967, Portugal had the least amount of emissions, 2
tonnes
. The CO2
emission
rose significantly and tripled in 1997 and stayed for a decade until 2007.
In addition
, the trend of Italy was the same as Portugal from 4
tonnes
in 1967 and under 8
tonnes
in 2007.
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