The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.

The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
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The maps illustrate how the school has modernized during the period from 1985 up to now.
It is clear that
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there are striking transformations in the school throughout the years. The most noticeable change is not only the shape of the main car park but
also
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the reduction in the size of the playing fields. As can be seen, on the top of the region, the main car park surrounded by a road used to be shaped rectangular, yet now is turned into a semicircle in order to have more space for planting trees. As the number of students increased from 1500 in 1985 to 2300 today, new classrooms are built in the east of the school and the 2-storey classroom block is reconstructed into a 3-storey one.
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, the office's location remains unchanged.
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, to the south of the area, the playing fields are shrunk half in size to save places for the pool
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the fitness centre.
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, the small parking is removed and the classrooms which stood next to the old library in the past are now relocated right in front of the sports facilities.
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, at present, the library is replaced by the learning resource centre and the computer room.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout
  • Significance
  • Accessibility
  • Expansion
  • Facilities
  • Trends
  • Priorities
  • Modernized
  • Well-being
  • Sustainability
  • Transportation
  • Innovative
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