In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
upbringing plays a vital role in a society and parents and others should take it into consideration seriously. It is suggested that
children
must be taught that if they try hard they can succeed in everything. Use synonyms
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who try hard can certainly reach achievements. Correct your spelling
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be trained to try under any circumstances, They are prone to become Fix the agreement mistake
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self-confidence
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Brave and Powerful.
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encouragement
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encourage
children
for trying hard, They should never be promised to achieve anything. Use synonyms
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children
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trying if they fail in their work and their life they will miss their self-esteem. Change preposition
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For instance
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all top universities by studying hard, after rejection they became Change preposition
to
disappointment
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lost
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can't never forget
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can never forget
can't ever forget
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, they can not confide their talent.
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children
should encourage to be determined and try hard so that no one can stop them from achieving their goals, it has Use synonyms
negative
effect on their Add an article
a negative
belief
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beliefs
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not only they should not give up but Correct your spelling
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