In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

upbringing plays a vital role in a society and parents and others should take it into consideration seriously. It is suggested that

children

must be taught that if they try hard they can succeed in everything.

This

statement has both benefits and drawbacks which in

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since decisiveness is one of the most attitudes with

children

, in some Nations people believe that

children

should encourage to be decisive and determined and tell

children

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those

who try hard can certainly reach achievements.

This

approach makes them hard-working and learn them to struggle with tough

situation

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situations

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and never give up in the face of problems and tough situations. In fact,

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children

who have learned to try hard are more likely to succeed during their life from childhood to

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the Future

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and it gives them a chance to try in the absence of thinking about discrimination and

favoritism

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favouritism

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.

For example

, if

children

grew up in underprivileged

family

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families

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be trained to try under any circumstances, They are prone to become

self-confidence

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because they know by trying hard they can overcome all obstacles

such

as Financial issues.

Therefore

this

education makes

children

Brave and Powerful.

On the other hand

, despite having some advantages to

encouragement

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children

for trying hard, They should never be promised to achieve anything.

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children

think they can reach whatever they want

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trying if they fail in their work and their life they will miss their self-esteem.

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, If students think can apply

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all top universities by studying hard, after rejection they became

disappointment

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disappointed

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and it will be a big

lost

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loss

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for them and they

can't never forget

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can never forget

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it.

consequently

, they can not confide their talent.

To conclude

, all

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children

should encourage to be determined and try hard so that no one can stop them from achieving their goals, it has

negative

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a negative

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effect on their

belief

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beliefs

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.

Therefore

, they should be told it is possible to fail and if any possibility

failure

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of failure

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is

happenned

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happened

happening

not only they should not give up but

also

they should try more.