Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes while others think one can’t be judged on the basis of one’s clothes. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Clothing has always played an important role in human lives.

While

some

people

believe that one’s choice of

clothes

provides valuable information about personality and cultural

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, others contend that it is impossible to judge a person solely based on their attire. The following paragraphs discuss both sides of the argument before presenting my own opinion. On the one hand, there are a lot of

people

who strongly believe that we can judge

people

based on their clothing since appearance is a

sign

of one’s character,

culture

, and lifestyle. Not only are costumes an inseparable part of each

culture

but

also

, they are a

sign

of their values since

people

unconsciously choose

clothes

that are in line with their mental beliefs and

culture

.

For example

, religious

people

who believe in the hijab always wear

clothes

that

covers

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all parts of their body

specially

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their hair. Or,

for example

, artists and musicians usually dress in a special way

that

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one can recognize their artistic style at a glance.

On the other hand

, most scholars claim that in today’s world

people

have access to a wide range of

clothes

. Advertisements and fashion play an important role in the way that

people

dress especially young

people

. Most of the time

people

tend to wear comfortable and cheap

clothes

and they don't like to wear special

clothes

even if they believe in a certain

culture

or belief.

For example

, a recent survey showed that there are a lot of youngsters that wear

clothes

with special signs that are about different topics

while

they have no information about these signs and they chose them based on their desire and

also

advertisements. In my opinion,

while

it is true that dressing is a

sign

of

someone

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mental beliefs,

culture

and character but it cannot be considered to be the only basis for judgment since there are a lot of

people

that just tend to wear comfortable, cheap and beautiful

clothes

despite the meaning of the signs on the

clothes

or their designs. To put it in a

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,

while

it is partly true that clothing is a

sign

of one’s personality and character, I would argue that dressing should not be the only basis to judge someone since in today’s world

people

tend to choose their

clothes

based on different criteria including price, comfortability, and advertisements.