Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes while others think one can’t be judged on the basis of one’s clothes. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Clothing has always played an important role in human lives.
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some
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believe that one’s choice of
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provides valuable information about personality and cultural
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, others contend that it is impossible to judge a person solely based on their attire. The following paragraphs discuss both sides of the argument before presenting my own opinion. On the one hand, there are a lot of
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who strongly believe that we can judge
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based on their clothing since appearance is a
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of one’s character,
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, and lifestyle. Not only are costumes an inseparable part of each
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but
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, they are a
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of their values since
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unconsciously choose
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that are in line with their mental beliefs and
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.
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, religious
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who believe in the hijab always wear
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that
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all parts of their body
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their hair. Or,
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, artists and musicians usually dress in a special way
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one can recognize their artistic style at a glance.
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, most scholars claim that in today’s world
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have access to a wide range of
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. Advertisements and fashion play an important role in the way that
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dress especially young
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. Most of the time
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tend to wear comfortable and cheap
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and they don't like to wear special
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even if they believe in a certain
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or belief.
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, a recent survey showed that there are a lot of youngsters that wear
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with special signs that are about different topics
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they have no information about these signs and they chose them based on their desire and
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advertisements. In my opinion,
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it is true that dressing is a
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of
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mental beliefs,
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and character but it cannot be considered to be the only basis for judgment since there are a lot of
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that just tend to wear comfortable, cheap and beautiful
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despite the meaning of the signs on the
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or their designs. To put it in a
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,
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it is partly true that clothing is a
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of one’s personality and character, I would argue that dressing should not be the only basis to judge someone since in today’s world
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tend to choose their
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based on different criteria including price, comfortability, and advertisements.
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