The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the changes in how people accessed the hospital in
one
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region during the period between 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that
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there are striking transformations in the area throughout the years with the appearance of two roundabouts
together with
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a bus station on the access way and the separation in types of car parks. As can be seen, in order to enhance safety
due to
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an increasing number of vehicles travelling back and forth every day,
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particularly noticeable change carried out was the first roundabout installed in the three-way junction in front of the hospital in 2010,
whereas
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 the second
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was
also
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built on the crossroad of City Avenue and Hospital Road to make the traffic more convenient.
Moreover
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, another significant development was that there used to be 6 bus stops on either side of Hospital Road in 2007 which took up lots of space,
therefore
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, 3 years later, those were removed and a station was constructed so that people could catch public transportation more easily.In the past, both the staff and the public had to use the same small car park on the eastern side of Hospital Street.
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, in 2010, a new public car park was erected on Ring Pathway
while
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the old
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was for staff only.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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