Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is argued that professionals,
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as Doctors and Engineers should
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in the
country
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where they obtain their training
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others believe that they should be freed to wherever they want to
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. Most professionals get scholarships from their
country
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and that's why they are obligated to
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in that specific nation but I believe the
hardworks
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hard work
and determination a professional puts in shouldn't stop them to
work
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in other
countries
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. On the one hand, there are
countries
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where they sponsor certain individuals for their education and training
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so that in future, the individual would repay the
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in the form of providing a service towards the citizens and
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help in boosting the economy as well.
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, a nation helped them to become a reputed professional and help them secure a career.
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, Many universities in the USA provide Medical sector scholarships for financially deprived people who have the talent to become but lack the money,
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shows that some individuals should pay the nation by providing their services.
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, In some
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, they did complete their training and education but they move to other nations, because
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better opportunities and
lifestyle
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. There are individuals who aspire to reach the pinnacle of their career and for
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they are required to move to other
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.
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, Engineers in India don't get paid enough for their
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usually around 15LPA
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in
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like the United States
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around 60LPA for the same
work
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. So for that reason, most engineers prefer to move to other
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for
betterment
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the betterment
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of their families and financially to fulfil all their ambitions.
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, if certain people consider working in the same
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due to
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obtaining benefits from the
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and they wish to repay that back by indulging themselves through services
then
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they should,
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, I believe there shouldn't be any obstacle to
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an individual from working in other
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for better opportunities if they wish for it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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