Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about computer courses that really interests you, but it is only for people who completed elementary course. write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter, - explain why you are writing - describe your circumstances - ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course

Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is William and I am 2nd year student from the Faculty of Economics. I am writing
this
letter to response about your computer courses.
Firstly
, I have an interest in studying computers, especially programming.
However
, I did not have any computer educational background.
Secondly
,
this
course was informed that only for people who have completed formal elementary courses. Because of
this
problem, I had trouble for applied your computer course. Despite I did not have a formal computing study, I
was
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learnt
computing
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when in high school from the internet and applied it to make some portfolios. If it needs some evidence, I could send my portfolio to the college officer. I would genuinely appreciate
for
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your help to make an exception about
this
matter. Yours sincerely, William
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