Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and imagination than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
In
the
recent times Correct article usage
apply
activities
that are in favour of a child are becoming more productive way
of developing skills Fix the agreement mistake
ways
such
as imagination than reading some kinds of books or journals and etc. Many individuals consider that this
way is much more
better, Change the word
apply
while
others oppose this
idea, and I partially agree with this
statement. The objective of this
essay is to examine the best method of
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for
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a childs'
childs'
skills development.
On the one Change noun form
child's
hand
reading can Add a comma
,hand
also
develop skill
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skills
such
as fast understanding. In other words
, by reading different materials children
can be thaught
how to get the information with Correct your spelling
taught
right
understanding and imagine it in their Correct article usage
the right
head
. Fix the agreement mistake
heads
For instance
, while
reading a book kid
always invent Fix the agreement mistake
kids
the
story with pictures in Correct article usage
a
his
brain. Correct pronoun usage
their
Consequently
, this
technique might be one of the effective ways of evolving.
On the other hand
, doing things by
which kids relish might be more successful. It means that Change preposition
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children
will not be forced doing
something. As an example of Change the verb form
to do
this
, every person enjoy
their hobbies and combining pleasant Change the verb form
enjoys
activities
with improving skills is better than forcing them to read something not by their own wish, it is consideren
that not every Correct your spelling
considered
children
Change to a singular noun
child
wants
to readChange the verb form
want
,
because Remove the comma
apply
in
their age they have a desire to play with toys, to paint and colour drawings and etc. Change preposition
at
Hence
, it is better to give a choice to the child to do what he relishes.
To sum up
, all the aforementioned points children
must do activities
that they want and not be compelled to do something. As far as I am concerned, if entertaing
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entertaining
activities
had been done by kids, every child would be delighted by learning new things.Submitted by amina07id on
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