limited money should be spent on computer equipment or a good teacher. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are various choices to punish criminals. Some of them believe that several programs or

punishment

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should be taken for

this

problem.

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I agree or disagree

toward

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this

dilema

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dilemma

. I personally support the idea stated that the

spesific

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programs and help for socials have greater impacts rather than tightening the

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. A famous figure,

Jhon

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Locke, once said "Humans are born empty, and the environment is the one who is responsible to the individuals".

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, I assume that some

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treatments may assist to overcome

this

problem.

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, the programs

such

as early

educations

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for

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, social

justices

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, and spiritual

value

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might set a good point

to

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this

issue. The government

also

might provide a

counselor

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to help

peoples'

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behavior

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Therefore

, I believe that cultivating awareness from the early beginning of human life is necessary to prevent

further

damage.

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, I totally oppose

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the

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punishment

tightening.

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could display

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sceneries

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for the

publics

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.

Moreover

,

this

regulation will damage social

psychologies

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. People

tends

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to become poorly behaved since

this

punishment

contradicts

from

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human rights.

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example of

this

is the famous conservative

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performed by Indonesian executioners. People believe that

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harsh

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will remind

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society of how critical

this

physical

punishment

would be.

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,

this

public execution is considered to be effective yet

this

sentence

would surely harm the society. In conclusion, I am confident to support the campaign of preventing crimes for social integration.

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, I assume

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prison

sentence

is not relevant for these minor crimes.

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, my position toward

this

motion is

supporting

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the

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society with special

treatments

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and help.