When a country develops its technology the traditional skills and way of life die out. it is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Traditional

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and matters are

disappering

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disappearing

because of our advanced

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invented every day in a nation. It makes no

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to still put efforts to save the old traditional ways. I totally disagree with it and will give my points below.

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preserving the

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you got from your ancestors is the biggest

inheritage

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inheritance

a

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can get. By

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the ways alive you keep your ancestors alive. It can be said that you do it out of respect and to save your own existence. In

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fast moving

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world, it is now hard to differentiate between people.

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, you have to preserve the culture of your nation and the community.

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is where you look different and unique. Saving culture is protecting your children from the

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culture.

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,

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years ago a

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in China was watering his fields with

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really old methods,

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a

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came and asked him to use

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new

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. The first

person

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replied, it may be easy to use new

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but

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is how many Lord teaches me to do it.

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, the use and advancement of

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is making people weak day by day. The more you rely on some outer source to work for you or

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help you

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the more you get weak mentally

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physically.

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but not least,

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is changing the Speed of life. it is more confusion and drama now than

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previous period.

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keeping the

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you learn from your future will help you physically and

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put peace in your mind.

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, 50 years ago people were more happy and charming than they are now.

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the gold we get from our ancestors Are these

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and way of life. we should not forget

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in the search

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modern and fake money.