You use public trasnport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport autoroties. In your letter include: why public transport is important to you what problem you face suggest what can be done to improve public transport

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to express my frustration regarding the TTC transports that I have been using for the

last

three years.

First,

I would like to thank you for the seamless service within the greater Toronto area.

To begin

with, I must take public vehicles every day

due to

my job, as I can not afford a private commute. I did not find

such

problems when I come to Toronto for the first time.

Moreover

, after the period of Covid 19, everything got changed. Nowadays, I have to wait a longer period of time to take the bus on my way to work.

In addition

this

, the bus does not come on time which is really frustrating.

Apart from

this

, the inside of the vehicle is extremely dirty

as well as

I get a bad smell from the bus which makes me nauseous.

Furthermore

, it would be great if you increase the number of buses.

Further

this

, impose strict rules regarding cleaning procedures. It will not only make your services better but

also

helps you to expand your business. I hope my suggestions were convincing enough to take action in

this

matter. Anticipating a positive response from you. Warm regards, Lisa

Submitted by Lisa Bhuiyan on Wed Jul 26 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

207 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You use public trasnport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport autoroties. In your letter include: why public transport is important to you what problem you face suggest what can be done to improve public transport

The Greeting

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