An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay give advice about what to do and see in your area give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Joyce, I'm so grateful to receive your letter and will be fantastic to enjoy your holiday in my city. I can wait to tell you about your vacation and provide you with some advice.

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, you can stay at my home during your vacation if you want. Considering your destination which could be far away from my house, I can contact my friend Lisa who is working in a hotel and I'm sure that she can provide more suggestions which could be more suitable for your plan. In your letter I know you will come alone, so you have more flexible options about where you want to go. I highly recommend that you can visit Ling Mountain and Guang Fu Road. Both of them are very popular with people who are interested in natural atmosphere and peaceful environment. You

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can experience local culture and customs in those places. By the way, the temperature in the morning and night is a little bit cold. Do not remember to bring your coat in order to get a cold. I cannot wait to see you. Best wishes, Tina.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation
attractions
landmarks
cultural events
outdoor activities
regional cuisine
seasonal weather
suitable clothing
local recommendations
hospitality

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