Dear Joyce,
I'm so grateful to receive your letter and will be fantastic to enjoy your holiday in my city. I can wait to tell you about your vacation and provide you with some advice.
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, you can stay at my home during your vacation if you want. Considering your destination which could be far away from my house, I can contact my friend Lisa who is working in a hotel and I'm sure that she can provide more suggestions which could be more suitable for your plan. In your letter I know you will come alone, so you have more flexible options about where you want to go.
I highly recommend that you can visit Ling Mountain and Guang Fu Road. Both of them are very popular with people who are interested in natural atmosphere and peaceful environment. You
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can experience local culture and customs in those places.
By the way, the temperature in the morning and night is a little bit cold. Do not remember to bring your coat in order to get a cold. I cannot wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Tina.