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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It is believed that the experts in various fields
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 as engineering and medicine should serve the nation from where they have been educated
while
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 some
people
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also
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 suggest that it must be their own opinion to choose the
country
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 for their professional life. In my opinion, both sides are equivalent,so I would discuss both views
further
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 in
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 essay and mention my opinion in the conclusion.
Firstly
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,
professionals
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 are the biggest asset of a
country
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 so they should serve their
country
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.
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,young experts in various fields play a key role in the progress of a
country
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 because
professionals
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 are needed to run companies smoothly and various companies pay taxes on 80% of the
country
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's economy relies.Indeed all the facilities
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 as education,treatment, transportation and security are paid back of taxes that are being paid by the nation to the government.So
people
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 should prefer to serve their own
country
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 rather than any other
country
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.
On the other hand
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, for better future
professionals
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 migrate to more developed countries.
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,when their talent is not being paid or admired much in a
country
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 so
people
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 have to leave their
country
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 and move to another place for better opportunities.
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, unemployment in a
country
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 tends
people
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 to leave their homes
besides
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this
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 after paying all the taxes they do not get any facilities either so they prefer to serve another
country
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 rather than their own
country
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.
However
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,
people
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 may leave their
country
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 for a better life and it is not bad.
To conclude
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, I think that it is the right of every person to make choices and improve their life
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 the countries can not bear the brain drain so they should focus on providing better opportunities to the
professionals
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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