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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should, explain what you like about his new house tell him/her what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Linda, I hope You are doing well. I wanted to thank you for our recent reunion over the weekend at your new place; it was very wholesome. You buying a new house came as a surprise, and having me as your first guest was an honour.
Firstly
, your house is amazing, and the way you have it decorated is commendable. Its elegant interior gave a beautiful vibe of happiness. Especially, its location is ideal - a wide backyard facing the rocky side of the beach, within the vicinity of main markets and play areas; the best place for kids to grow.
Secondly
, I must mention that I loved your housewarming party idea. We cooked together, sat
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 your terrace, and viewed the sunset - it was just perfect. Our tea time, with all of our old photo albums, made the moment even more special.
Also
, keep in mind that we need to plan another get-together.
This
 time, we can plan an outdoor trip to Funland. It will be fun and thrilling, with all the thrilling rides that we can experience there. We can schedule it for next month's first weekend as it's the long weekend; it will be easy to travel. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours truly, Sera
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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