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Question -Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available

#-your #manager #party #colleague #company #date #time #venue #food #entertainment #options
Dear John Smith, I am writing regarding the farewell of Mr Samish Shan. I am thinking of deciding different venue as compared to an ordinary one. First of all, the party date should be suitable for everyone.
For example
, some of our dear colleagues work on weekends as well.
According to
 my opinion, the 25th of September will be good, because of the public holiday. All members of the company with their family members will able to attend.
Besides
, afternoon timing can be appropriate
due to
 working day on the very next day.
Similarly
, the most crucial thing is a venue and it should be decided in advance. We have a couple of options in the city
for instance
 Green Valley Resort, which is quite popular
as well as
 it is near our company. Other than that, they have vast cuisine options. Both vegetarian and non-vegetarian choices are available there.
On the other hand
, live music performances are quite popular. Even though, anyone can participate in the musical concert. I hope you will consider
this
 advice. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur.
Submitted by harpreet291kaur on

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coherence cohesion
The letter has an appropriate greeting and closing, giving it a formal tone.
task achievement
All points of the task have been addressed, giving a complete response to the prompt.

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