Question -Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available

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Dear John Smith, I am writing regarding the farewell of Mr Samish Shan. I am thinking of deciding different venue as compared to an ordinary one. First of all, the party date should be suitable for everyone.

For example

, some of our dear colleagues work on weekends as well.

According to

my opinion, the 25th of September will be good, because of the public holiday. All members of the company with their family members will able to attend.

Besides

, afternoon timing can be appropriate

due to

working day on the very next day.

Similarly

, the most crucial thing is a venue and it should be decided in advance. We have a couple of options in the city

for instance

Green Valley Resort, which is quite popular

as well as

it is near our company. Other than that, they have vast cuisine options. Both vegetarian and non-vegetarian choices are available there.

On the other hand

, live music performances are quite popular. Even though, anyone can participate in the musical concert. I hope you will consider

this

advice. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur.

Submitted by harpreet291kaur on Thu Sep 05 2024

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0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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