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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is quite common
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 that contact between many different places in the
world
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 has developed rapidly by
air
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travel
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 and telecommunications. It is my belief that the positive effect of
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 innovation could certainly offset its disadvantages. There are several
drawback
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of
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 the
development
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 of contact through
air
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travel
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 and telecommunications. A common reason is the growth of crime.
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 is because
people
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 can easily connect with their gangs around the
world
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 by
telecommunication
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 in order to make
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 evil plan. It is hard for
government
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 to monitor and prevent these gangs. Another reason is the
information
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sercurity
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security
 risks. In fact, the loss of
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 security through
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 is increasing day by day
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 the
development
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 of digital technology.
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 leads to a lot of personal
information
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 being leaked and affects many
people
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's lives. Leaked
information
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 can be sold all over the
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 and is difficult to stop.
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, as reported
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 the US Government in 2020, there
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 15.643
people
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 who
were
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leaked their
information
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 through
telecommunication
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. Their lives were turned upside down and 30% of them are stressed.
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, in spite of these negative
effect
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effects
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,
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contact through
air
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travel
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 and
telecommunication
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 can
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 about more
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. One obvious
advantages
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 is that economic
development
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 between parts of the
world
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 will have many
development
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 opportunities.
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 is because
people
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 can interact with each other more easily.
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, many commodity exchanges will take place, promoting the exchange of goods between countries. Another positive effect is
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educational and research
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 around the
world
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. In fact,
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connectivity through
air
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travel
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 and telecommunications creates opportunities for
information
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 exchange.
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 process can create many opportunities to contribute to the knowledge treasure worldwide.
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,
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 a report by The Times, the
development
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 of connectivity through
telecommunication
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 and
air
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travel
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 contributes to 63% of the
development
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 of research on Covid-19 disease, helping to find the vaccine for
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. In conclusion,
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 the
development
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 of connectivity through
air
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travel
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 and
telecommunication
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 can
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 many
disavantages
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disadvantages
, it is obvious that the benefits of
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development
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 are more worthwhile than its possible dangers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global trade
  • economic boost
  • cultural exchange
  • global peace
  • educational resources
  • carbon emissions
  • environmental degradation
  • social isolation
  • economic inequality
  • technological dependence
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