the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea
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The diagram illustrates the processing of black
tea
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in two ways, the Traditional method and the Modern method.
Overall
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, the initial steps remain the same,
that is
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the picking of the bud and apical leaves which ensures good quality of
tea
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.
Subsequently
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, almost 60% of the moisture is dehydrated by Withering the
tea
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leaves on a rack.
Next,
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the leaves can be processed by the novel method where the leaves are cut, torn and curled, and
this
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results in a more efficient way of producing small granular bits in
tea
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bags. In comparison, the conventional methodology results in loose
tea
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leaflets, by Rolling them flat and breaking them, which causes the release of enzymes.
After
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this
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, both kinds of by-products are subjected to Fermentation or Oxidation respectively, where the
tea
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leaves are spread on cement or on tiles which is done in order to ensure that the enzymes react with air to produce a richer copper colour.
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, they undergo Firing or Drying either in ovens or in air dryers ensuring 97% of the moisture content is lost, owing to the enriched aroma
as well as
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flavour
that is
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experienced on drinking black
tea
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional method
  • CTC method
  • Manufacturing process
  • Withering
  • Rolling
  • Fermentation
  • Drying
  • Sorting
  • Crushing
  • Tearing
  • Curling
  • Quality
  • Flavor
  • Aroma
  • Technology advancements
  • Environmental considerations
  • Consumer preference
  • Pricing
  • Tea grade categorization
  • Market implications
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