the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea
The diagram illustrates the processing of black
tea
in two ways, the Traditional method and the Modern method.
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Overall
, the initial steps remain the same, Linking Words
that is
the picking of the bud and apical leaves which ensures good quality of Linking Words
tea
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Subsequently
, almost 60% of the moisture is dehydrated by Withering the Linking Words
tea
leaves on a rack.Use synonyms
Next,
the leaves can be processed by the novel method where the leaves are cut, torn and curled, and Linking Words
this
results in a more efficient way of producing small granular bits in Linking Words
tea
bags. In comparison, the conventional methodology results in loose Use synonyms
tea
leaflets, by Rolling them flat and breaking them, which causes the release of enzymes.
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After
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, both kinds of by-products are subjected to Fermentation or Oxidation respectively, where the Linking Words
tea
leaves are spread on cement or on tiles which is done in order to ensure that the enzymes react with air to produce a richer copper colour. Use synonyms
Finally
, they undergo Firing or Drying either in ovens or in air dryers ensuring 97% of the moisture content is lost, owing to the enriched aroma Linking Words
as well as
flavour Linking Words
that is
experienced on drinking black Linking Words
tea
.Use synonyms
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