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The table shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia. Summarize the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia. Summarize the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the price of
water
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 and the average
household
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water
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 bill,in five Australian cities.
It is clear that
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Melbourne
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residents
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 have the lowest
water
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 bill per
household
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 on average ,
while
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Perth
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 households have the largest
water
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 bill.
Additionally
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,there is little to no difference in the cost of
water
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 for
residents
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 exceeding 125 kilolitres in Brisbane,Sydney and
Melbourne
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whereas
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Perth
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 and Adelaide
residents
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 pay significantly higher rates. The cost of
water
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 in Adelaide and
Perth
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 is $0.42 per
kilolitre
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 for use of up to 125 kilolitres.
However
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,
this
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 cost increases to $1.00 in Adelaide and $1.50 in
Perth
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 for
water
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 use exceeding 125 kilolitres.
Residents
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 in
Melbourne
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 and Sydney,
on the other hand
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, pay a set rate of $0.78 and $0.98 respectively per
kilolitre
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 of
water
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, regardless of the total amount used,
while
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 those in Brisbane pay $0.81 per
kilolitre
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 and $0.84 for
water
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 use surprising 125
kilolitre
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. Regarding
household
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water
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 bills,
Perth
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residents
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 have the highest on average, at $332,
while
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 the average in
Melbourne
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 is $253.
Residents
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 in other cities pay an average of between $310 to $320 per
household
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, household, melbourne, residents, perth, kilolitre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cost of living
  • urban infrastructure
  • utility rates
  • supply and demand
  • metropolitan areas
  • water consumption
  • price variation
  • tariff systems
  • economic factors
  • budget allocation
  • household expenditure
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