The table shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia. Summarize the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia. Summarize the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the price of
water
and the average
household
water
bill,in five Australian cities.
It is clear that
Melbourne
residents
have the lowest
water
bill per
household
on average ,
while
Perth
households have the largest
water
bill.
Additionally
,there is little to no difference in the cost of
water
for
residents
exceeding 125 kilolitres in Brisbane,Sydney and
Melbourne
whereas
Perth
and Adelaide
residents
pay significantly higher rates. The cost of
water
in Adelaide and
Perth
is $0.42 per
kilolitre
for use of up to 125 kilolitres.
However
,
this
cost increases to $1.00 in Adelaide and $1.50 in
Perth
for
water
use exceeding 125 kilolitres.
Residents
in
Melbourne
and Sydney,
on the other hand
, pay a set rate of $0.78 and $0.98 respectively per
kilolitre
of
water
, regardless of the total amount used,
while
those in Brisbane pay $0.81 per
kilolitre
and $0.84 for
water
use surprising 125
kilolitre
. Regarding
household
water
bills,
Perth
residents
have the highest on average, at $332,
while
the average in
Melbourne
is $253.
Residents
in other cities pay an average of between $310 to $320 per
household
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cost of living
  • urban infrastructure
  • utility rates
  • supply and demand
  • metropolitan areas
  • water consumption
  • price variation
  • tariff systems
  • economic factors
  • budget allocation
  • household expenditure
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