The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.
The given pie charts illustrate the amount of water used for agricultural produce
such
as sugar and fruit and earned profit from their sales in Australia in 2014.
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Overall
, the maximum and minimum usage of drink was livestock and rice respectively in 2014. Linking Words
In addition
, in the same period, money from fruit sales was the highest. Linking Words
By contrast
, animals had the least cash.
As can be seen, in 2014, the biggest percentage of demand for water among farming consumers was livestock at 36%, but, the money received from them was the lowest percentage with 5%. Linking Words
However
, fruit had the second highest proportion of consumers with 21% ,but it had the best earnings with 36%. Linking Words
Whereas
the proportion of drinks used for dairy was 14% more than rice (5%) but income gained from them was just 2% more than rice (21%). It is worth noting that the figure for sugar and other products was squall to that of the money earned by them.Linking Words
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