It is true that teenagers graduate from high school without knowing how to handle their finances. I will discuss
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that
and give causes and
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/SOLUTIONS for that problem.
One main cause of
this
issue IS that nowadays, high
schools
think education which will support
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finding jobs.
This
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will help to have a better career path. Because high school show that they are not
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enough to understand and they still should depend on their family. Their family should take care and control their
money
to spend more
so that they can'
t
use
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for any bad case. High
schools
also
believe that students needn'
t
study
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financial management because they can'
t
earn a lot of
money
while
they are learning, they should pay
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their life and
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then
they can gain more
things. When they reach the right age, they will have comfortable
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, understand
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importance of
this
issue and study
money
management more easily.
On the other hand
, We
together with
high
schools
should have a lot of solutions for that issue. High
schools
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for managing finance. Because they can early aware of the importance of
money
, they can use it more carefully. they will help their family
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will make them
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uncomfortable when they
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controlled. That
also
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necessary skills for their life when they have to
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from their parents
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some occasions. Families should give a little
money
and teach them how to use it
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help their children needn'
t
rely on their parents. If they don'
t
know how to manage, they can be affected by a lot of bad elements and very easily lost
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them.
In conclusion, High school should have
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in teaching them about financial management, equipment is indispensable because it is very important that can serve them in many cases in their life